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  1. Draug419
    November 30, -0001 @ 12:00 am

    I guess a McDonald’s is only beautiful if it’s shut down (:

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  2. barbara
    January 24, 2013 @ 2:32 am

    I like the premise of your story . . . all end of the world-ish. One typo I noticed is out of site – should be out of sight. Hope to see more of you in future challenges.

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    • Cheney
      January 24, 2013 @ 10:42 am

      Ew! Thanks for pointing that out, I just edited it. I do hope to do Trifecta more, I love these challenges!

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  3. barbara
    January 24, 2013 @ 7:32 am

    I like the premise of your story . . . all end of the world-ish. One typo I noticed is out of site – should be out of sight. Hope to see more of you in future challenges.

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    • Cheney
      January 24, 2013 @ 3:42 pm

      Ew! Thanks for pointing that out, I just edited it. I do hope to do Trifecta more, I love these challenges!

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  4. joetwo
    January 24, 2013 @ 3:35 am

    Nicely done. What wonder we can find even at the end.

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  5. joetwo
    January 24, 2013 @ 8:35 am

    Nicely done. What wonder we can find even at the end.

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  6. KymmInBarcelona
    January 24, 2013 @ 4:29 am

    Doesn’t get much sadder than a post-apocalyptic McDonald’s.

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  7. KymmInBarcelona
    January 24, 2013 @ 9:29 am

    Doesn’t get much sadder than a post-apocalyptic McDonald’s.

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  8. Draug419
    January 24, 2013 @ 7:34 pm

    I guess a McDonald’s is only beautiful if it’s shut down (:

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  9. trifectawriting
    January 24, 2013 @ 9:39 pm

    Super interesting. I’d love to read more.

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  10. trifectawriting
    January 25, 2013 @ 2:39 am

    Super interesting. I’d love to read more.

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  11. Day 31 – All Full Up – giving up the ghost
    January 31, 2013 @ 11:55 pm

    […] five pieces of fiction that I shared online: This is How to Make Things Work, Crazy, The Bird, Out in the World, and my favorite, Bang Bang Bangladesh. I wrote 26,328 words on 750words, some of them also fiction […]

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  12. Day 31 – All Full Up – giving up the ghost
    February 1, 2013 @ 4:55 am

    […] five pieces of fiction that I shared online: This is How to Make Things Work, Crazy, The Bird, Out in the World, and my favorite, Bang Bang Bangladesh. I wrote 26,328 words on 750words, some of them also fiction […]

    Reply

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