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  1. barbara
    November 30, -0001 @ 12:00 am

    there are times when I wish I was on an island – all by myself – and then . . . . I wake up. 🙂

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  2. atrm61
    February 2, 2013 @ 3:24 am

    Nice inspired piece:-)Loved “Castaway” .

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    • Cheney
      February 2, 2013 @ 11:48 am

      Me too! I hadn’t seen it in years but it’s such a great movie. Thanks!

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  3. atrm61
    February 2, 2013 @ 8:24 am

    Nice inspired piece:-)Loved “Castaway” .

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    • Cheney
      February 2, 2013 @ 4:48 pm

      Me too! I hadn’t seen it in years but it’s such a great movie. Thanks!

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  4. lovethebadguy
    February 2, 2013 @ 5:17 am

    Love the voices you’ve crafted here. Great use of your 33 words. 🙂

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  5. lovethebadguy
    February 2, 2013 @ 10:17 am

    Love the voices you’ve crafted here. Great use of your 33 words. 🙂

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  6. Libby
    February 2, 2013 @ 8:18 am

    Very creative take on the prompt. I think this is Skipper and Gilligan talking 🙂

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    • Cheney
      February 2, 2013 @ 11:47 am

      Haha yea they would be funny about it tho, I would be horrified!

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  7. Libby
    February 2, 2013 @ 1:18 pm

    Very creative take on the prompt. I think this is Skipper and Gilligan talking 🙂

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    • Cheney
      February 2, 2013 @ 4:47 pm

      Haha yea they would be funny about it tho, I would be horrified!

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  8. Sandra
    February 2, 2013 @ 8:36 am

    Nicely done, great take on the prompt.

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  9. Sandra
    February 2, 2013 @ 1:36 pm

    Nicely done, great take on the prompt.

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  10. Draug419
    February 2, 2013 @ 9:46 am

    That last line is chilling >__<

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    • Cheney
      February 2, 2013 @ 11:47 am

      That’s what I was going for 🙂 thanks

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  11. Draug419
    February 2, 2013 @ 2:46 pm

    That last line is chilling >__<

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    • Cheney
      February 2, 2013 @ 4:47 pm

      That’s what I was going for 🙂 thanks

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  12. debseeman
    February 2, 2013 @ 12:23 pm

    Each time I read it I hear a different voice. I can hear escape, I hear terror, I hear excitement. So many possibilities. Well done.

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  13. debseeman
    February 2, 2013 @ 5:23 pm

    Each time I read it I hear a different voice. I can hear escape, I hear terror, I hear excitement. So many possibilities. Well done.

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  14. CorinnePM (@CorianderPM)
    February 2, 2013 @ 1:20 pm

    “Enough.” — oh, Gosh. I took comfort in that they weren’t alone; they have each other.

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  15. CorinnePM (@CorianderPM)
    February 2, 2013 @ 6:20 pm

    “Enough.” — oh, Gosh. I took comfort in that they weren’t alone; they have each other.

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  16. Lumdog
    February 2, 2013 @ 2:06 pm

    Interesting response and cool dialogue.

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  17. Lumdog
    February 2, 2013 @ 7:06 pm

    Interesting response and cool dialogue.

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  18. memyselfandela
    February 2, 2013 @ 3:52 pm

    Great post. 🙂

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  19. memyselfandela
    February 2, 2013 @ 8:52 pm

    Great post. 🙂

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  20. Suzanne
    February 2, 2013 @ 3:54 pm

    Great dialogue. Scary scene. Well done!

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  21. Suzanne
    February 2, 2013 @ 8:54 pm

    Great dialogue. Scary scene. Well done!

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  22. jannatwrites
    February 2, 2013 @ 4:50 pm

    Scary to be lost….terrifying to think someone might never find you.

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  23. jannatwrites
    February 2, 2013 @ 9:50 pm

    Scary to be lost….terrifying to think someone might never find you.

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  24. deanabo
    February 2, 2013 @ 5:23 pm

    Terrific! I enjoyed this one.

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  25. deanabo
    February 2, 2013 @ 10:23 pm

    Terrific! I enjoyed this one.

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  26. barbara
    February 2, 2013 @ 7:43 pm

    there are times when I wish I was on an island – all by myself – and then . . . . I wake up. 🙂

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  27. Jennifer Dillon
    February 3, 2013 @ 1:40 pm

    Last line is awesome. It really only takes one

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  28. Jennifer Dillon
    February 3, 2013 @ 6:40 pm

    Last line is awesome. It really only takes one

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  29. joetwo
    February 3, 2013 @ 2:05 pm

    True all you need is one!

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  30. joetwo
    February 3, 2013 @ 7:05 pm

    True all you need is one!

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  31. Sandra
    February 3, 2013 @ 6:04 pm

    Totally thought of Cast Away even before I read your afterword. What an incredibly scary feeling!

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  32. Sandra
    February 3, 2013 @ 11:04 pm

    Totally thought of Cast Away even before I read your afterword. What an incredibly scary feeling!

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  33. trifectawriting
    February 3, 2013 @ 8:40 pm

    Oh no, Wilson!!! 🙂 Scary. I hope they have some good reading with them.

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    • Cheney
      February 3, 2013 @ 8:40 pm

      Alas, they do not. It is a true horror.

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  34. trifectawriting
    February 4, 2013 @ 1:40 am

    Oh no, Wilson!!! 🙂 Scary. I hope they have some good reading with them.

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    • Cheney
      February 4, 2013 @ 1:40 am

      Alas, they do not. It is a true horror.

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  35. Christine
    February 4, 2013 @ 12:25 am

    Great job with the prompt! I can imagine that conversation really happening in that situation. 🙂

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  36. Christine
    February 4, 2013 @ 5:25 am

    Great job with the prompt! I can imagine that conversation really happening in that situation. 🙂

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  37. Day 35 – No Rest For the Writer – giving up the ghost
    February 4, 2013 @ 11:09 pm

    […] few days ago, when I was watching Cast Away and then wrote for Trifextra, I got this idea for a new novel and I haven’t been able to get it out of my […]

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  38. Day 35 – No Rest For the Writer – giving up the ghost
    February 5, 2013 @ 4:09 am

    […] few days ago, when I was watching Cast Away and then wrote for Trifextra, I got this idea for a new novel and I haven’t been able to get it out of my […]

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