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  1. trifectawriting
    November 30, -0001 @ 12:00 am

    I love it. I love the ass in the sink and the inability to read and the walking toward and not away from. Good stuff. Thanks for linking up.

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  2. Paula J
    January 9, 2013 @ 9:39 pm

    I like this. I think it’s all the little details. Makes it sound so real.

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  3. Paula J
    January 10, 2013 @ 2:39 am

    I like this. I think it’s all the little details. Makes it sound so real.

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  4. atrm61
    January 10, 2013 @ 2:22 am

    What a horrifying scenario-no power-dark,stormy weather & being haunted by a dead wife to boot-eeee!!:-)Loved this piece & two prompts from two different contests used so effectively-wow!

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    • Cheney
      January 10, 2013 @ 12:36 pm

      Yup! I plan on continuing this piece to link up with the Master Class, adding some length and more story. Come back and read it Friday!

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      • atrm61
        January 10, 2013 @ 1:02 pm

        Sure will:-)I checked that site out last night & boy it was amazing but too scary for the likes of newbie like me-maybe someday in the future when I have gathered some experience on this road;-)

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  5. atrm61
    January 10, 2013 @ 7:22 am

    What a horrifying scenario-no power-dark,stormy weather & being haunted by a dead wife to boot-eeee!!:-)Loved this piece & two prompts from two different contests used so effectively-wow!

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    • Cheney
      January 10, 2013 @ 5:36 pm

      Yup! I plan on continuing this piece to link up with the Master Class, adding some length and more story. Come back and read it Friday!

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      • atrm61
        January 10, 2013 @ 6:02 pm

        Sure will:-)I checked that site out last night & boy it was amazing but too scary for the likes of newbie like me-maybe someday in the future when I have gathered some experience on this road;-)

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  6. trifectawriting
    January 10, 2013 @ 7:19 am

    I love it. I love the ass in the sink and the inability to read and the walking toward and not away from. Good stuff. Thanks for linking up.

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  7. Draug419
    January 10, 2013 @ 10:43 am

    There’s a strong sense of frustration, almost, that I get from this. And I bet the sink is uncomfortable… (:

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    • Cheney
      January 10, 2013 @ 12:34 pm

      Yeah, and I realize now I should have added in how the faucet was poking into his back.. come back and read more Friday!

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  8. Draug419
    January 10, 2013 @ 3:43 pm

    There’s a strong sense of frustration, almost, that I get from this. And I bet the sink is uncomfortable… (:

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    • Cheney
      January 10, 2013 @ 5:34 pm

      Yeah, and I realize now I should have added in how the faucet was poking into his back.. come back and read more Friday!

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  9. Linda Vernon
    January 10, 2013 @ 10:25 pm

    I like this. Told from the kitchen sink. Refreshing point of view! 😀

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  10. Linda Vernon
    January 11, 2013 @ 3:25 am

    I like this. Told from the kitchen sink. Refreshing point of view! 😀

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  11. Jerimi
    January 11, 2013 @ 4:20 pm

    That last line is just haunting (no pun intended!). It really nails it.

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  12. Jerimi
    January 11, 2013 @ 9:20 pm

    That last line is just haunting (no pun intended!). It really nails it.

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  13. unevenstevencu
    January 13, 2013 @ 1:34 am

    congrats on your win! Nice job!

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  14. unevenstevencu
    January 13, 2013 @ 6:34 am

    congrats on your win! Nice job!

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    January 31, 2013 @ 11:55 pm

    […] a painting. I created five pieces of fiction that I shared online: This is How to Make Things Work, Crazy, The Bird, Out in the World, and my favorite, Bang Bang Bangladesh. I wrote 26,328 words on […]

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  16. Day 31 – All Full Up – giving up the ghost
    February 1, 2013 @ 4:55 am

    […] a painting. I created five pieces of fiction that I shared online: This is How to Make Things Work, Crazy, The Bird, Out in the World, and my favorite, Bang Bang Bangladesh. I wrote 26,328 words on […]

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