1. Tara R.
    October 13, 2011 @ 7:16 pm

    A chilling story! Well paced and filled with wonderful imagery.


  2. Mare
    October 14, 2011 @ 5:58 pm

    This was great. I loved the description of the house and the setting – it made it all the more easier to fall into the story.


  3. Karla
    October 16, 2011 @ 6:49 pm

    Ooooh, so very creepy! Thoughout the whole piece I kept wondering if perhaps she had been there all along and he had simply pushed her out of his mind… but then, the wedding dress. Nicely done!


  4. kgwaite
    October 16, 2011 @ 9:55 pm

    CReeeeeeepy! I loved this. So well done. I love his reaction. HOpe that you do more with this.


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