11 Comments

  1. Tina
    August 19, 2015 @ 10:29 am

    Yep–I’ve seen that. I like how you set the stage for the ending!

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    • Cheney
      August 19, 2015 @ 10:56 am

      Thanks, Tina 😉

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  2. theinnerzone
    August 19, 2015 @ 9:54 pm

    Intense. Loved how you fused the last line so effortlessly.

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    • Cheney
      August 19, 2015 @ 10:09 pm

      Thanks! & thanks for stopping by!

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  3. Kathy Combs (@KathyCombs16)
    August 20, 2015 @ 6:58 am

    Wow…that is powerful. That last line really clinches it. ♥

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    • Cheney
      August 20, 2015 @ 12:29 pm

      Thanks, Kathy!

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  4. Shailaja/ The Moving Quill
    August 20, 2015 @ 12:38 pm

    Pretty much my writing process every day. Well rendered.

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    • Cheney
      August 20, 2015 @ 12:39 pm

      I’m lucky if it goes this well every day. Haha!

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  5. Kalpana Solsi
    August 20, 2015 @ 1:14 pm

    When mind and fingers are ready in unison there is no stopping.

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  6. Michael
    August 20, 2015 @ 4:13 pm

    I think that might describe my writing process too. … Very nice. 🙂

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    • Cheney
      August 20, 2015 @ 9:51 pm

      Thanks, Michael!

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