7 Comments

  1. trentpmcd
    September 16, 2015 @ 10:32 am

    Sad story but I’m sure too often true…

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  2. Tina
    September 16, 2015 @ 11:10 am

    So heartbreaking! I loved the imagery.

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  3. Kalpana solsi
    September 16, 2015 @ 12:05 pm

    Poor child! Wish the kid got the attention she deserved.

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  4. Nortina S.
    September 16, 2015 @ 1:18 pm

    A very unique response to the prompt. And yes, very sad that something so small like being too busy could destroy a child’s hope and ambition.

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  5. Kathy Combs (@Kathy29156)
    September 17, 2015 @ 6:47 am

    Sad and devastating.

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  6. Jennifer G. Knoblock
    September 17, 2015 @ 11:32 am

    So powerful to tell this through dialogue.

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  7. Michael
    September 17, 2015 @ 2:10 pm

    Awwww. Poor kid. That moment won’t come back.

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