1. kgwaite
    January 21, 2012 @ 3:11 am

    Beautifully done. This was a great read.


  2. Anna
    January 21, 2012 @ 5:55 pm

    I enjoyed reading this, I really want to know what happens next 😛


  3. Trifecta
    January 22, 2012 @ 2:38 am

    Thanks for participating in this week's challenge. Just a reminder, as the contest closes later today–the word we need is the NOUN form of sway, not the verb. Drop us a comment on Trifecta if you change it, ok? Thanks!


  4. Cheney
    January 22, 2012 @ 3:48 am

    Oh, well crap. Eh, I'm not changing it this time. Next week, I'll follow the rules, but this week? I got inspired. I don't need to win to win here, in that regard.


  5. Jessie Powell
    January 22, 2012 @ 5:09 am

    I loved that ending, that it didn't matter who she was, only who he was, and that he belonged to her.


  6. Trifecta
    January 25, 2012 @ 7:14 pm

    Hey CheneyJust to remind you that this week's challenge closes on Thursday evening, not Sunday. Are you joining up this week? We'd love to have you back.David


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