9 Comments

  1. katkasia
    November 25, 2013 @ 10:25 pm

    Great stuff. Love it. 🙂

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  2. annbennett
    November 26, 2013 @ 8:07 am

    This is super. I love the way you told how time creates distance with memories. Excellent work.

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    • Cheney
      November 27, 2013 @ 12:26 am

      Thank you very much, Ann!

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  3. Momo
    November 27, 2013 @ 5:46 pm

    Oh this is beautiful and haunting. I love it! “I could write your memoirs and sing your gospels” is a great line.

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  4. Draug419
    November 28, 2013 @ 9:44 am

    Awesome work. A lot of emotion weaved into the words!

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  5. Cheney
    November 29, 2013 @ 2:19 am

    Thank you very much!

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  6. trifectawriting
    November 29, 2013 @ 4:07 am

    I love the idea of singing your gospels. Lovely.

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  7. atrm61
    November 29, 2013 @ 5:28 am

    Lovely-this made me sigh!

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  8. Tara R.
    November 29, 2013 @ 7:06 am

    Very poignant and heartbreaking.

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